So far in the story they were searching for food day after day. they had to sneak back to Mattru Jong and get money to buy food. Not only were they going back with little food in there stomachs but they had to sneak past the rebel guards patrolling the area.
"We got hungrier day after day, to the point our that our stomachs were hurting and our visions blurred at times"I belive that it explains how hard it was to walk for miles, let alone run and hide from the guards, better than the other lines. I chose this line because i felt that it best described how hungry they were i have gone to the point where it was a little painful for my stomach, but getting to the point were my body dident have the nutrients to see clearly I cannot imagine.
Kyle,
ReplyDeleteThough there's some sloppy grammar (sorry for my pickiness) there is a great point made. How there hunger drove them back, but that it also slowed them down.
I wonder, too, how that physical strain played on their mental capability. I was hoping you would say a bit on there, as it seems you were pushing towards this in developing the physical strain.
Good job,
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